Shifting

Isn’t it funny?

The way your world can fall

Apart so many times.

But just maybe

It hasn’t really fallen

Apart at all.

Perhaps it is just

Shifting.

The sand is

Moving away

So that I can figure out

What is my rock?

Reviews

[Brenda Woods]

I loved this a lot; awesome work, and such an interesting take on change. I liked how you talked about the world falling apart around you, but how it might actually be shifting, instead. Interesting how we can think things are awful when maybe they aren't, maybe they're simply an obstacle for us to learn from. If that makes sense. (I think I lost myself in my own words, sorry.)

Great work, keep it up!