Pain

Pain

A Poem by magnalee

Pain,
It’s addicted to me like I’m cocaine.
Shoots through my body and into my veins 
And brain driving me insane.
My bloody tears fall like rapid grains of rain.
I wince in great pain that can’t be explained.
It’s simply just too much for the human brain.
I don’t understand what the ones who hurt me gain.
The ones you trusted be the main.
Pain ties like a knot of connected chains.
Ties my arms and hold me in the choke chain.
It leaves and comes back for more like a busy airplane.
Pain,
On the clearest glass window it leaves a stain.
The hurt tattooed on the window pane.
In my heart it all maintains
Pain fills up my cup like a glass of champagne.

© 2014 magnalee


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I like the ideas in this, some very good use of words, but if i were you i wouldn't make every sentence rhyme, try doing it every other line instead, i find that has more impact

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magnalee
magnalee

miami, FL



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