Intro to Mirror (Yourself)

The intro (kinda) to my poem Mirror

It ruins every human on the planet
They don't feel like they can be the strong person they want to be

They want to hide
from the day they were born
Til the day of judgment,
criticized, made fun of
Til the mirror destroys them

And the mirror will never be proved wrong
And that's all you wanna do
This is it
The time, to face
Yourself

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[Kara]

no. it's beautiful. i think that everyone has kind of experienced what you're talking about. so a lot of people can relate. i love your word choice, and the flow is really good. beautiful, hannah.