One Time

One Time

A Story by Galldora King

You talk to me

I love it

The whole day

I think about it

 

Whether you said

Hi

Bye

Hey

Or...How are you

 

I think I must swoon every time you say something

You must think I’m weird

Yet everyday

Every moment

I see you

 

And wonder

What you think of me

Why make things so complicated

Why not just tell me

You won’t regret it

Just one time

 

© 2010 Galldora King


Author's Note

Galldora King
This ones after Meeting You. SO be sure to read that one first.

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Good work, I like it, but please tidy up the punctuation.

I read this before "Meeting You", and I think it is more meaningful by itself. It means more to me if I can find my own meaning, rather than having a particular situation in mind which the earlier poem describes.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 27, 2010
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