Love

Heart

This pain does keep

time with love

on burdened wing

I fall

Reviews

[Scribbles]

Definitely a breath of fresh air! I admire the fact that it can convey the depth, the pain, the need for release and escape, pretty much everything that underpins the idea of love, without lengthy rambling or soliloquising. Thankyou!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Simple and to the point. Love it.

[CrochetRie]

Love the simplicity but inspiring and beautiful!

[Rene Velez]

short and powerful Maggie, the message is there...

[Raindrop]

I read it a couple of times till my brain registered. It's fantastic. Short, yet full of emotions. Really slows you down and makes you think about the meaning of it all.

[bob, small b. aka invs]

well written. the short lines, spaced the way they are, slow down the reader and force a little more thought than if this had been written in sentence form. it took me much longer to digest this than it appears as if it should. the poem is short, but dense. if that makes sense. and it describes the feeling perfectly.

[Sasha]

Very small yet it has so much meaning it. :)

[Emily B]

it may just be my foolish nature, but these words seem to be shaped like the moon, maybe midnight noticed a falling star

[♥]

Wow, this is a really deep poem that left me thinking. It made me feel heavy because of the meaning you bought in little words.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is heavy....
I felt the weight of the world
bearing down on my shoulders.