Love
A Poem by
MaggieSummers
Heart
This pain does keep
time with love
on burdened wing
I fall
© 2011 MaggieSummers
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Amazing.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This was beautiful, I loved it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This was beautiful, I loved it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
goed write
Posted 13 Years Ago
goed write
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
what a gripping image you've created here~ pure visual/emotional connect~
Posted 13 Years Ago
what a gripping image you've created here~ pure visual/emotional connect~
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
so short , but good.
Posted 13 Years Ago
so short , but good.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Succint and powerful. I like the way the majority of the poem is monosyllabic like a heartbeat.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Succint and powerful. I like the way the majority of the poem is monosyllabic like a heartbeat.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
nice work Maggie...emotionally the bitterness of pain keeps us within that memory of ended love and the heart is where it hurts the most...
Posted 13 Years Ago
nice work Maggie...emotionally the bitterness of pain keeps us within that memory of ended love and the heart is where it hurts the most...
So simple and so beautiful.
Posted 13 Years Ago
So simple and so beautiful.
I love poems that can speak volumes with just a few mere words. xo
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love poems that can speak volumes with just a few mere words. xo
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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MaggieSummers Victoria, Australia
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I am a dark poet, seldom funny, sometimes rhythmic... I write from my wounded soul, healing as I go. The writing of poetry for me is cathartic and powerful. I make no excuses, I need no approval. I wr..
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