Untitled Poem

So I have this friend, and I like her, and she possibly likes me (maybe) idk and these are my feelings.

A slightly raised eyebrow

Is possibly my favorite greeting.

To hold your hand,

My one best comfort.

The warmth in the way

You hold me close lets me forget

That this can't last.

You're going places, dear,

And I'm quite glad to say.

The journey will take you, 

Far and wide, from places you see gray.

The next time you see a shooting star,

Or hear a sweet song of love in your car,

Know that I will never be too far

To hear what you have to say.

All I want is the best for you,

Because nothing but the best will do,

So all my luck, I give to you 

To send you on your way.

Author's Note

This was entirely random. It's just been on my mind for a while.

Reviews

[cilla]

What a sad and pretty a little poem. Letting go .... saying goodbye beautifully because there is nothing more that we can say. Reminds me of an old song lyric ... but if you take the love that i am giving you then i won't feel like i'm losing you. That's what we really hope for, yes?

Yours is the second poem I've read tonight about saying goodbye and I get all gooey and teary eyed and melancholy and remember old songs that once meant so much.

As does your poem ... well done to be able to solicit all of this feeling!

[Moon]

Very sad , but lovely . It is hard to let loved ones go . The ones that are dearest to you can leave the biggest impacts on your life . The emptiness you feel when their presence is gone is extremely painful .