Thirst

Ode to water

Water can move mountains and wash away the hardest stone

Helping us to clear our conscience, fresh to atone

Relentless and yet soft enough to gently caress our skin

Grower of life, giver of resurrection

Can clean our souls and wash away our sin

Teeming with an unseen life of its own.

Full of promise

Full of hope

 Rejoice in its power

Dance in the rain

Drink from the fountain of youth

Never let your thirst be sated

Glorious yet mundane

The world reflected in a drop

Anticipation for the coming of the new day

Wasted as it drips away.

Reviews

[Zahra]

Interesting theme
The world reflected in a drop
Anticipation for the coming of the new day
Wasted as it drips away.
very nice.

[Leigh]

Nice to have something different to read about and this not an easy subject to write about I imagine, only air would be harder. There is quite a lot of water about in the UK at the moment, with all the storms, but nevertheless your words have revitalised and refreshed me, thank you.

[magenta24uk]

I did write it before the storms lol. I think many people in Britain are just wishing for a dry spell at the moment. Thank you for your review and for reading. :)

[Neon]

Yeah, A very true write!
I quench the thirst of reading this great poem by your words.. a water's what that gives lives and cleans away our impurities and sins as well ... what a great description of water you penned into the words. I liked the poem even it's an interesting piece to me as well as an unique one either to read something like that on water because I haven't read before such a splendid piece. The words, layouts, construction of words and so on everything's well penned ... even you know what, when I was reading this poem, me too was quenching the thirst of mine reading the beautiful poem ... lol

Keep writing!

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Quite nice...this one...especially the idea...

[prodicallife]

Dear magenta,

Same are my reviews here too!!

Really new topic. Please maintain the spacing.

One more thing I will add here, I have seen that you never stick yourself in a particular rhyme. Although that is also an art but, it is something that is needed when you prefer focusing a reader onto a particular paragraph or opposite of it that is, you wish to take his focus off from it.

Please maintain a particular rhyme for the poetry. There are many as in, [aa, bb, cc] or [ab,ab,bc,bc] different form of rhyming a poetry.

You could refer to google even for that.

Keeping writing.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[magenta24uk]

Again thank you. I understand what you refer to but I am trying to mix up my poetry at the moment and make it a bit more unique. Poetry need not rhyme or follow rules, that is just my feeling of the moment. I will probably revert back to my old style soon. For now I am enjoying a liberation from the convention. :) Thank you again for your comments all reviews are needed and wanted. Thank you x

[prodicallife]

Woowww!! that is the most beautiful moment I swear and would not prefer you to move back to your old version.

Poetry is most beautiful when you are not bounded, you don't have anyone to hold you so that you can fly. No, I am sorry for the reviews above, I revert back with a strong recommendation that, fly high, be aimless and write whatever you feel like.

This is best.

Lots of blessings dear friend.

Regards
Prodical