Untitled, for now. VERY ROUGH DRAFT

Untitled, for now. VERY ROUGH DRAFT

A Story by MaeLynne
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Start of the story of a girl and the guy who broke her heart.

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Bzzzz. I wake to my phone going off. "Hello?" I answer sleepily.

" Hey!, wakey wakey, im coming over" it was Andy, my much to loud and chipper bestfriend.

She hangs up. That was Andy though, what she said goes. If she was coming over id have about 15 mins until she burst through that door and started gossiping about whatever happened to whoever earlier that day. It was friday night, i had come home from work and planned to just rest my eyes, but that was at 5:30, and its now 8:43. I knew what Andy had planned, it was friday, which ment we were going to the mustang, the local bar we liked to hang out at. Picture the mustang as a small hole in the wall, with boozed stained carpets, a live band, and the faint smell of B.O. Yeah it wasnt the greatest, but after going a few times it became a regualr thing, and sure we could easyisly go somwhere else, but i dont like change. I walked down the plain hallway to the bathroom. Id been living on my own for 6 months now and still couldnt be bothered to hang any pictures or art. I turned on the shower and let the steam fill the room. I walked into the showe and let the hot water surround me. I took a deep breath, sure showers were relxing, but they were also where i thought the most, i seemed to not be able to turn my brain off, not even for 5 minutes. I heard the front door open, Andy must be here. I hop out of the shower and grab my robe. I enter the living room to see Andy plugging in her phone charger over by the window. Andy was no taller then 5'5 with platinum blonde hair with bold bangs. She could go from sweats to jeans and her cowboy boots in seconds and look stunning.

"So guess who i heard just broke up today!" Andy proceeded to tell me about these people we went to highschool with, that i barley remmeber, as i started to blowdry my hair. Andy had been my bestfriend since the first day of highscool, that was 8 years ago, weve been inseperable ever since. I decided to do a quick facebook scroll while i waited for my hair straightner to heat up. I pretended to care about so and so having a baby or some kid from highschools graduation picture, but i was really only looking to see if he, Adam, had posted where he was going tonight, sure enough, a picture of him and his closest friends posing with there red solo cups came up. They'd be at mustangs tongiht, no doubt about it. Adam Long, the guy who i thought at one point was "the one" is now just a person i use to know. Its been 8 months since we broke up, and we only dated for a year, so i should be over it by now, right?

"Lola?.... Lola!" I was torn from my train of thought to Andy snapping her fingers in my face.

"What, oh sorry, super interesting artical on facebook"

"uh huh, well anyways, like i was saying... Brit should be here any minute, and then we have to hurry up and get to Taverns before the line is to long"

" Taverns? I thought we were going to Mustangs tonight? " i asked confused.

"Yeah well change of plans, its brits brothers friend Zachs birthday tonight so we're going there instead, besides, from the look on your face a minute ago, im guessing Adam is gonna be at Mustangs tonght, and i dont feel like dealing with that tongiht."

I sighed and decided to go pick out somthing to wear. Id never been to TAVERNS before so i wasnt exactly sure what i should wear, i decided to go with my favorite jeans and a red long sleeve shirt. I heard the front door open again, must be Brittany, my other bestfriend. Brittany trasftered to my school in our senior year, she had come to our school so she could graduate with her boyfriend, Max. I remeber seeing her walk into socials class, wearing a mini skirt and black leather boots, her long black hair perfectly wavy, of course everyone was quick to judge, but i offered her the seat next to me anyways, we talked during class over the next few months, we got along but wernt bestfriends right off the bat. She actually didnt have any real friends at all, she mostly spent time with her boyfriend and his friends. Well, until the day she caught Max making out with some guy from his softball team. I remeber seeing her in the hallway during second period, sitting on a bench crying, i asked if her she wanted to go grab some icecream and weve been friends ever since. Of course now we laugh about the gay ex boyfriend and how it happened for a reason. 

© 2017 MaeLynne


Author's Note

MaeLynne
Sorry for the poor grammar and run on sentences.
Needs some serious editing but curious if its boring or interesting at all.
Thanks.

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Added on May 10, 2017
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MaeLynne
MaeLynne

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Totally not a writer, kind of just wrote something and wanna hear if it sucks or not, appreciate honest feedback. ps yes i know my grammar is awful more..