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A Poem by Mae Bee
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The quick, bitter thoughts after a conversation with someone you believ(ed) to be your true and only love.

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pulling teeth.
and sucking everything out of your sockets.
i taste the years of things left unsaid in your blood.
iron, copper, oil.
you're rich, baby, you're rich.

every morning
i stand under the water in the shower
and touch my wrists.
feeling where i'll make my mark.
that was all i could think when you
said you were glad i wasn't dying.

i guess it depends on how you define
"dying".

© 2008 Mae Bee


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hey! You gave me determination.

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How terrible! To suddenly discover that your life has been a lie all along. But don't give him the satisfaction of taking that life; nobody's worth that! Your final line is poignant, and disturbing. It should give you the answer to your problem... Leave him!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poem by Mae Bee