Nail Polish

Nail Polish

A Poem by Madeline G
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Association poem starting with the word nail polish

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Nail polish

Pretty

Fun

Games

Moving

Bang

Chipping

Flakes

Ugly

Remove

Cotton balls

Acetone

Smell

Feet

Toe nails

© 2013 Madeline G


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I really liked how you brought in bang. It really brought the poem alive. I like how well you made the words connect with each other. One suggestion I would make is to make some more words be directly unrelated to nail polish just like bang and moving were. But all in all it was really good :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I liked how you really tied almost all of the words to the top word. Very nice poem.


Posted 11 Years Ago


i like how you did a circle poem, it really works with the topic of nail polish

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really liked how you brought in bang. It really brought the poem alive. I like how well you made the words connect with each other. One suggestion I would make is to make some more words be directly unrelated to nail polish just like bang and moving were. But all in all it was really good :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the big leaps you gave in the middle, from moving to bang and then chipping, it makes the reader really think about your thought process. I love the broad connections you made, nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 4, 2013
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Tags: nail polish

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Madeline G
Madeline G

Worthington, OH



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