I really liked how you brought in bang. It really brought the poem alive. I like how well you made the words connect with each other. One suggestion I would make is to make some more words be directly unrelated to nail polish just like bang and moving were. But all in all it was really good :)
I really liked how you brought in bang. It really brought the poem alive. I like how well you made the words connect with each other. One suggestion I would make is to make some more words be directly unrelated to nail polish just like bang and moving were. But all in all it was really good :)
I like the big leaps you gave in the middle, from moving to bang and then chipping, it makes the reader really think about your thought process. I love the broad connections you made, nicely done!