Dream 101

I dreamt of you in my sleeping hour

Laid out before me on the cold stone

Your Naked beauty fill my vision

Alabaster skin almost glowing

The sweat beads on the surface

A slight breeze chilling the air

Leaving the skin with bumps

Your cries cant be heard

You are trapped with my Dreams

I have control over you

With a wave of my hand

We appear in that old room

Standing face to face

I, Clad in black, you in red silk

Eyes glaring with into other

The first to crack loses

Neither will give way in this battle

Small as it shall be, the gains are immense

The is one battle neither will win today

The one against time and the sunrise

The light shall chase the dream away

Maybe it shall come to the mind once again

Reviews

[xansizi]

To me he seems to be using his dreams to control things that he has no power over in reality. I don't know if that is as you intended but I guess the reader brings new meaning and perspective.

Your description is extremely evocative- it is easy to picture the scene. The poem is easy to read. I really enjoyed it.

If you get a chance could you please review my work 'The Crash'. There are 2 chapters so far- reviews of either/or would be most welcome

[Michael Wright]

Control is but an illusion, correct? Thank you

[xansizi]

Something like that- more that dreaming frees you of constraints and allows you to accomplish things that ou would never have considered possible. Where would we be without dreams, after all.

You're welcome- your poetry was a pleasure to read

[Michael Wright]

I have more to come. Editing and proofing as we speak

[Jesse]

Nice start, like a dream put into poetry...thanks for sharing.

[Sami Khalil]

Your dream 101 is a battle of hope and vision. We can either embrace our dreams or chase it away. An excellent write...:)....

[Michael Wright]

Thank you ..... Honestly I never know if they are good or just trash

[Sami Khalil]

Ok. You are welcome...:)......