Take it or leave it.

Take it or leave it.

A Poem by Madelyn G.

What more can I give you, 
If it is my body that you want 
take it and f**k it.
If it is my money you want,
take it and spend it.
If it is my time you want,
take it and waste it.
But if it is my heart you want
leave me be
for the only one who can have my heart completely is me.

© 2011 Madelyn G.


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Things take two to work through... but only one - to cry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the logic of this poem. Last line was very good. Your words are true. You may control a lot of things. Old heart is safe and secure by our defenses. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nicely done. I love the way this write is in your face and to the point.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice! This poem is the stuff that poets dream of, powerful and empowering. This speaks volumes to me and I am glad I got to read it. Careful what one wants to aquire from a poet, it might be something that is off limits or own by someone else!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brutally honest and raw, a perfect
way to express yourself in this
ultimatum... Nicely done...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Madelyn G.
Madelyn G.

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