pain

when i lost you i learned -

physical pain hurts less than emotional pain.

here i sit

crying on the bathtub floor.

water turns red but yet 

i am only bothered by your absence.

you told me that you would always be here

but i do not see you right now.

Author's Note

thank you for taking the time to read this.. please review!

Reviews

[sheandherself]

you told me that you would always be here
but i do not see you right now.

How can such a little number of words be so strong I'll never understand, but I'm loving it.

[??????]

Aww a very deep poem I enjoyed :)

[M]

thank you so much!

[??????]

Your very welcome:)

[Patricia Stephmore]

"And when I was falling, I thought you'd hold me and save me...little did I know....you were the one to push me."
Over and over again you just surprise me Madeline!!!!!!!!
Beautiful words and touching poetry.....

[M]

i love this, thank you so much

[Patricia Stephmore]

Your welcome :-)

[Patricia Stephmore]

Your welcome :-)

[Andrew Nelson Stewart]

Pain is meant to wake us up. People try to hide their pain. But they’re wrong. Pain is something to carry, like a radio. You feel your strength in the experience of pain. It’s all in how you carry it. That’s what matters. Pain is a feeling. Your feelings are a part of you. Your own reality. If you feel ashamed of them, and hide them, you’re letting society destroy your reality. You should stand up for your right to feel your pain.”
― Jim Morrison

To say pain is the essence of human existence, and keep walking along the broken road of life, cause each time you feel pain you are directed to permanent things stored for you in life.

[M]

i love this, thank you so much

[Andrew Nelson Stewart]

Keep being the warrior and know no battles can stop you. Sincerely your friend in poetry and life.

[Emily]

Love this!
Your very talented!
Well done!