pretty lies

every time i heard those

three words

fall from your lips i knew

it was a lie

but i loved you so much that

i let you deceive me 

every night

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Another very relatable write... How sad those moments are, although we don't realize it at that time because we loved that person so much that even if they said those 3 words without any real feeling, we still trusted them... I believe many readers can relate to your poem... It speaks of the blindness and heartbreak we get in love when the other person don't love us back truly and act as if they love us.... Clappings!!!!! Well done....

[Aventicus]

Pleasure is quite the euphoric drug, and it is taken in any amount, until there is no more to give.

[Hayli DeAnn]

I love this. It's so simple yet it captures that sad/amazing moment almost everyone experiences. Very good piece of poetry :)

[M]

thank you so much Hayli!!

[Hayli DeAnn]

You're very welcome! Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes we will accept pretty lies. Greed for kiss and touch overtake common sense. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[M]

thank you!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Patricia Stephmore]

Ouch!!!!
Madeline ......just four lines and such impact
You're good at this.... Thumbs up ...