what did it feel like when you realized he was never coming back?

what did it feel like when you realized he was never coming back?

A Story by madeline
"

your first love's impact will remain with you for your entirety

"

when I realized he was really gone, it felt like a punch to the gut, as if the wind was knocked from me. my lungs empty, my eyes full of pain, my muscles clenched, my stomach twisted. i felt like i had just been hit and left to find my way back to breathing. my first love, gone forever. it felt like uneasiness. it felt like anger. it felt like weight. it felt like love.

© 2017 madeline


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madeline
this is shitty I know, but its worth sharing.

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The old saw: "Love Hurts." The few lines you posted explain why.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on July 16, 2017
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Tags: love, pain, hurt

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madeline
madeline

fort wayne, IN



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