Importance

We all go through it!

School,

What to do with it?

What to do without it?

 

We all come to school,

To say that we learn,

and parents have deep concerns.

 

With grades that we make,

corrections, mistakes,

with friends that act like snakes.

 

With the drama that comes,

with the friends that go,

you will eventually get through this "game show,"

 

That controls your life,

you make the choices,

you hear the voices;

 

To make the right decisions,

that will effect you;

I promise you'll get through.

 

Just remember everyone else is going through the same thing,

your not alone.

we're all cyclones,

 

in this big and twisted world.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

ignore the grammar.

Reviews

[Madeleine Grace]

Thanks guys!

[Collette Paige]

Truly wonderful.
I love how your mind works, it seems to speak to a lot of people (even when they don't admit it ;D)

[Viki Rachel]

With grades that we make,
corrections, mistakes,
with friends that act like snakes.

My favorite line, so natural, so flowing.
This is my favorite poem of yours. I wish I could comment longer but the bell is about to ring!