Sea of Shadows

Ice salty tears.
Fall to the ground.

Flowing from my eyes.
A never ending waterfall.

But this isn't a beautiful sight.
The pain is over barring.
 
I've casted you off.
Into the Sea of Shadows.

Where my lost loves lies.
Ripping at one another.

There black piercing eyes striking me.
Shelton hands reaching for my flesh.

I turn away and find you.
I've never loved until I met you.

Never caught a glimpse of its magic.
Of is overflowing power.

It was to much.
I couldn't hold on.

You got to close.
To that dreadful edge.

I blew a silent wind.
That casted you off.

Into the dark and lonely sea....

Author's Note

Not my best work

Reviews

yes now this is very well penned, this write would be amazing in my new contest "Rock and Roll Heart Failure" I like the context of this write. Amazing

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww. Saddening but heartfelt. I can feel the hurt and wanting to be released to the sea.. Stunning write!

[joshua deathdealer]

I think this is so beautiful. Well written with great metaphors.

[Coyote Poetry]

This is beautiful poetry. Using the sea to make your point. I like the feel of sadness and the desire to release the pain into the wind and the sea. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Distant horizons]

Bittersweet emotions, beautifully expressed.