Locked

Locked in this trance.

If only I had a chance.

Hair black as night.

Moons replace your eyes.

Stars turn lifeless.

The sight of you turns

priceless.

Your love has awoken me.

From my internal sleep.

Your eyes unlock my chained heart.

Your touch awakens a love long lost.

Reviews

[MOON]

Beautiful write, nice flow !

[P.S.Chance]

I really like the dreamlike prose. Nicely done!

[joshua deathdealer]

Very nice..

[Chesney W.]

kinda reminds me of the fairy tale sleeping beauty, only different... a very beautiful short piece...i like this!

amazing read, : )

[I'm Just me:)]

i love this its awesome great write my future writer of a friend :)