Medow

Sun striking my skin.
 Warming it to the touch.
A light breeze picks up.
 Little strands of hair lick my face.
 Cheeks turning a blushing red.
 Brushing my hand across the green grass.
 Feeling its dampness from morning dew.
 Sitting under a large oak. In the middle of a calming meadow.
Listing to the birds sing.
 Waters rushing near by.
 Small creatures prancing around.
 Not being disturbed by my presence.... 

Reviews

[I'm Just me:)]

yeah this is amazing i love it alot its truly totally awesome :) lol and i like how u put it not alll in lines its awesome

[Monica-Antoinetta-Magda..]

this is a great use of imagery, however in your last line ....do you mean "Presence" rather than "presents"? either way, it's a lovely piece of work

[Ezio Auditore]

I can in-vision myself there right now

[Draven]

I like this. It has a nice vibe to it.

[Chesney W.]

like i have said before, your a very amazing writer! very vivid imagery! .. i love it! very interesting to read..

[0AudreyClaire0]

I love this! It has great imagery. You did a great job. :)
-Aud