October

October

A Poem by Maddy Raye

October is the month where my whole ife changed.
October is the month where my life got rearranged.
October is the month when I tried to take my own life away.
October is the month when I cried and finally prayed.
October is the month I got my heart broke more than once.
October is the month I met someone who now makes my day.
October is the month where I sat down and starting to pray.
October is the month where I cried out for help.
October is the month where I learned some self help.
October is the month where my whole life changed.
October is the month where my life got rearranged.



© 2016 Maddy Raye


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Well said. Simple words yet powerful and honest sounding. Tyfs!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Cyprian Van Dyke

7 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Maddy...
What a meaningful poem..
Shows strength...and knowing when to ask
For help...is profound..
Shows wisdom...
Self empowerment...
It's like a chant...
Very Well Written
Debbie

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very honest and brave. There are eleven more months for things to shine for you. thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It seems October month means a lot to you and full of incidents that impact your life.

Well written!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Yes they did impact my life and it changed me. Thank you :)
Wait a minute, what month did this happen in? Naw, just kidding:D haha Anyway, I like how it grows to be self empowering. That's cool!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Thank you :) your funny
Tony

7 Years Ago

You're welcome, have an awesome day!
Expressed almost every color of life and all related to October..
Good work Maddy

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
October is a good month for the kids. Halloween. I liked your thoughts dear Maddy.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome Maddy.
well i hope for the best,love will come
when you don`t expect it..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
 wordman

7 Years Ago

you are welcome !

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Maddy Raye
Maddy Raye

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I'm a 14 year old girl who loves to sing and write. My favorite thing in the entire world is love. My poems and stories are mostly about love. I turned to poetry because I never fit in with anyone. Al.. more..

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