A fatal love story.

A fatal love story.

A Story by Maddy Raye

There once was a girl who loved a boy. They talked and laughed and planned the future. They thought it would last that they would never breakup. Until the day she got hurt because he lied to her. That was their very first fight. You see, she forgave him because she loved him. Later on she got so scared she started another fight. One she thought she would lose because he swore to always love her.
She said I can't be with you anymore. He didn't understand and called her evil and told her she hurt him. But what if he was the one who hurt her? You see, they were in love and then their whole world just crashed, just like That. He didn't understand why she was doing this. Hurting him. She was doing it because she was
Scared of what would happen if she didn't.
She was scared of the future. She was scared to death that he would stop loving her. She knew it would hurt her less of she just ended it then.
She cried and cried because it hurt more than she thought. He called her evil and cruel and that just hurt her more. She tried to explain why she was doing this but he wouldn't listen. He didn't even give her a chance. Now its not just the boys fault. She left him,remember that. But honsetly I don't think that's how their story is supossed to end.

© 2016 Maddy Raye


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So sad that they drifted apart. Sometimes in love when in doubt or worries about future and insecurity... it so happens that you drift away. I think Trust is s small word but means a lot in relationship.

The story never ends till there is a happy end :)

Let them both meet again and be together or find people who match their ideas and be happy with their respective love.

Good story.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)



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This is so good. It's relatable and I feel like that is something everyone can relate too.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Yes I agree. It is something a lot of people can relate to. Thank you. :)
So much pain, so much chaos, so much of everything! And although I've never had a relationship, I feel like I can somehow still relate. It must be a crazy thing to be in love.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Yes it is a very crazy thing. But love is stil precious. I hope when you do get in a relationship th.. read more
😂

7 Years Ago

Me too ! Thank you!
Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Your very welcome :)
So sad that they drifted apart. Sometimes in love when in doubt or worries about future and insecurity... it so happens that you drift away. I think Trust is s small word but means a lot in relationship.

The story never ends till there is a happy end :)

Let them both meet again and be together or find people who match their ideas and be happy with their respective love.

Good story.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
wow that is a good story. very creative and deep.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Thank you!!
great story maddie, sometimes fear just takes over,or maybe it was just good common sense
but either way it turned out the same..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

Did sorry!!
 wordman

7 Years Ago

well if it`s real he will call you back,and if he don`t you`re better off
Maddy Raye

7 Years Ago

True. Thank you.

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Added on November 28, 2016
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Maddy Raye
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I'm a 14 year old girl who loves to sing and write. My favorite thing in the entire world is love. My poems and stories are mostly about love. I turned to poetry because I never fit in with anyone. Al.. more..

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