I'm dreaming of a place

Im dreaming of a magical place where love is the only race.
Where we can run and laugh and want to do it again.
Where no hurt is allowed, only the peaceful feel where it all begins.
I dream of the sun beating down on my face, knowing the whole world will be a blaze.
I'm dreaming of the hills, I can run down and lovingly fall into your arms.
Where we can love and love and never once start a fight.
Where we live and laugh and hold each other tight.
Where the clouds whisper peaceful things saying everything will be alright.
Im dreaming of a place where time doesn't exist.
Where we can in love over and over again.
Where our story began.

Reviews

[Ashish]

If you find that place then please inform me ..I also want to go there..:)
Don't mind I was joking..

Nice work Maddy

[Maddy Raye]

Thank you! I Will be sure to let you know if I find that place. :

[Noor Zahra]

Your poem is very beautiful. Truly portrays your wish for a world where love and harmony matters the most. Purely optimistic.

[Maddy Raye]

Thank you!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Superb! It's all seems like the Twilight effect in your words. The rhymes are again great here and the flow of words is marvellous. Greatly done!

[Maddy Raye]

Thank you again. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I'm dreaming of that place :) lol

[Maddy Raye]

Lol yea its peaceful there :)