Mon Coeur

Mon Coeur

A Poem by Philosophile. (Maddy)
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Answering past accusations wrought in error.

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When the fog rolls in

With gripping hands

And the skies turn

A grayish drear,

I am beside myself

Dwelling on betrayals

You’ve committed,

Sad that these acts

No longer harm me.

Once upon a time

I believed in friendship,

Love, comradery,

Only to learn it’s but selfish flattery.

How you were the same!
My sad lover,

Don’t despair

Though you’ve wronged me

And I am beyond

Your long fingers,

Your pale palette,

I’ve given you memories

To hold dear within you.

Though in error

Your accusations attacked,

I am beyond harm.

Oh, love,

Though your eyes

Are now clouded

In the shrouded fog,

I won’t blame you

Nor seek revenge

For past wrongs,

But karma may.

This fair lady

Tends to Arrive without delay.

 

© 2008 Philosophile. (Maddy)


Author's Note

Philosophile. (Maddy)
Not my usual. No no no. The foggy scenery has not altered over the past days. The weather is constant.

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AG
seriously, how could you keep on writing like that?

i wish i had your style of writing.

really, another astounding opus!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My oh my, seriously what a wonderful form of expression... your portrayal of love gone bitter is excellent... you have some real talent.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this. You painted a very clear image, and these lines are fabulous.
"But karma may.

This fair lady

Tends to Arrive without delay."

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Philosophile. (Maddy)
Philosophile. (Maddy)

stockton, CA



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The above is a picture I took. Taking pictures makes me happy. Editing also done by me as I am an editing nerd. I've been into picture snapping as of late. Ella stole my heart one day with her .. more..

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