Untitled No. 7

It takes 21 days to

break a habit

or so I've been told.

It's been 20 since our lips last

touched and I can't think of

anything else except your

eyes and the galaxies growing

inside them and how someone

else is busy exploring them

on Friday nights.

You're dust in my lungs,

poison in my veins but by

the 21st day, I won't be dreaming

of getting lost in the stars and

exploring the worlds beyond them.

It takes 21 days

to break a habit but

it takes 2

to break a heart.

(M.S.)

Reviews

[Neon]

That's pretty Impressive write, Maddi!

All the love you'd since you 20 started from then to now and whatever you feel when your lips locked up with the guy you loved or love, everything you penned into the words, it's not "UNTITLED NO.7" but the "HEART OF MADDI" that's been opened with the words. That's why I love this cafe's site, too many creative writers are flying over the site to spread their scent of stuffs, skills all around the world. I can feel the pain of your heart but the love too your heart feel about life because "life brings love and love brings peace."

Ending is very good, it's very excellent! Your feelings are very strong, Maddi!
I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel sad, so don't sad!
Everything'd be cool! May God bless you!

[Maddi Snowden]

This is really too kind! I truly appreciate it. Thank you. And I promise, I'm not nearly as sad as I seem. (: Thank you again.

[Neon]

Thanks for replying me and now am glad you ain't sad because "Neon" loves watching someone as beautiful as you feel happy ever :)
So, keep smiling because it's you who pours the beauty of kindness, beauty of love into the world, into the heart of everyone to let the world go live with peace with the scent of your angelic heart beat :)

It's all my pleasure to read your stuffs.
I love reading your stuffs!

[Maddi Snowden]

Thank you very much! I don't know what else to say. You're being far too kind (:

[Spaghetti Head]

I like the way you write. Its as if the audience is actually reading the way that the author would talk. Nice structure.

[Maddi Snowden]

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it (: