The Universe

Do you think that

the moon ever gets lonely when he

thinks about the countless souls

staring up at him wondering if their

other half is doing the same and

I wonder

if the sun is tired of showing its

face to the lovers who never learned

each others last names and have we

ever considered that the stars

are not in our eyes or in our faults

but in the passion of our breath

and the raw beauty of being happy?

Sometimes I think that the

universe is working

to try and push two people

together by making a train late

or by purposely breaking your heart.

But I am beginning to think that I'm

meant to take long walks at dawn

and make conversation with the dew

drops on daisies all by myself.

And despite these thoughts,

I am really hoping that

the universe is rooting

for us.

(M.S.)

Reviews

[Neon]

An inspiration to write stuffs like that burns into the heart of those who gonna be reading this magnificent piece, "The Universe" It's seemed that you've captured all over the universe into your pretty amazing words. I'd heard that angels make the world beautiful with their scent but I didn't know, "They make the heart filled with the passion of doing for what it's ever wished to with their words as same as you done." Am honored to read your stuffs, Maddi!

[Maddi Snowden]

Wow. This is far too kind! Thank you very much for these wonderful words. I really appreciate you reading my poetry! (:

[Neon]

The pleasure is always mine, pretty!
Your amazing at writing n I love reading your stuffs.
read moreThe pleasure is always mine, pretty!
Your amazing at writing n I love reading your stuffs.

Am glad you love my reviews and I love watching you happy because when you smile, you make the sand gold n let the wind go damn cold :)
So, keep smiling and spreading the scent of yours to make the world beautiful living!

[Neon]

And I love watching you happy so keep smiling because it's you who make the sand gold and let the wind go so cold with the beat of your heart, the coldness of your love.

Keep smiling and making the world peaceful with your scent!

[katnisscat]

Wow. Whoa. I really love this piece. It is a beautiful concoction of mystery, fate, and love. I want to read it again and again and again. I'e found a new poem to add to my favorites!

[Maddi Snowden]

Wow! Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!

[katnisscat]

I appreciate you writing this because it is absolutely amazing! I enjoyed every moment!

[Maddi Snowden]

You are so kind! Thank you!!

[Author Unknown]

The moon was this awesome romantic mysterious thing hanging up there in the sky
where you and I could never reach it. No matter how much you and I wanted to.
But you are absolutely right ! Once you and I are up there its just but a big dull rock ...

[Maddi Snowden]

I was thinking about the stories of the man in the moon and wondering if he ever gets lonely, but yeah. Definitely a let down once we finally got there hahah.

[Author Unknown]

Yes absolutely..They do ...I have a song that I can suggest. " Rocket Man" by Sir Elton John ...

[Maddi Snowden]

I am familiar with it! But thank you!