Like a rose

I dunno this is my first poem so be nice?

The vines stick

The wispers start

The tears slide down

In the dark

Its not controled

They cant be stopped

just when you think the worse came

It gets topped

Love is like a rose

the vines and the thorns

the lies hit the bone

nothing you've felt sience you where born

the shadows come down

coming over you

when you realize

theres nothing you can do

nothing can change

and now you carry

all the blame

Loves like a rose

covered in blood

you colect you tears

and drown in the flood

Reviews

[Kara Langelier]

ILOVE IT

[Maddie]

thanks guys :) i apreseate it and i bet it doesnt suck babe

[Alexa Tasch]

really good mads. much better than my first poem. mine sucks lol. this ha a really good rythem to it

[Amber Tasch]

awwwwww! its so good!

[Maddie]

thanks you julie :)

[Julie Beth]

and its an amazing first poem :)