Our World

Late nighting it

In this sea of fear and anger and blood and bones

Covered by ash and fire,

It is here where we build our lives.

This hell,

Is our home.

Author's Note

I don't really know anything about poetry. I could never write it or understand it... I don't know if this kind of thing counts as poetry... It was just something in my head.

...Anyway I hope it's not too bad.

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

It is indeed poetic! Do not worry. I like very much, indeed! You just keep on writing, please do!

[CaillenJames]

Thank you very much for the encouragement.

[ANTO]

I think its poetry - its eloquent and has metaphor and it has something to say - its as much poetry as many other pieces on the WC that claim to be poetry too. Maybe its the 'free verse' form - Im not exactly sure.
If I wrote it I'd be proud. It has layers.
Well done CJ.
:))

[CaillenJames]

Thank you very much ANTO. That means a lot coming from you. I appreciate it.

[ANTO]

You flatter me CJ.
:)