Whispers

Whispers in the morning dawn

Tells of a night of love

Whispers at evening twilight

Tells of love that's bright

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

This piece is "fully comprehensible. It encompasses all. Well done!

Vincent

[Not A Writer]

Cool double meaning here. You use dawn and dusk as perfect contrast. Nature and time might change but love will remain. Good contrast here. Good job in communicating this to your audience and good use of imagery.