The Wind, Susurration

 

Petals prance like deer in spring,

Caressed by gusts of butterfly wing,

In evergreen trees the hummingbirds sing,

In tune with bees: love's honey-sweet sting.

 

The wind steals your voice, and whispers to me,

'cross diamond-topped mountain and sapphire-kissed sea,

Through fields dipped in amber and ruby and jade,

To strum soft my heartstrings with love's serenade.

 

Reviews

[Matt Sayer]

Now a winters heart, longs for spring,
There to be, rejuvenated, and to sing,
To feel the little creatures, within the spoken words,
To smell the air, of love's roads...

This is brilliant poetry my Mattie, (Mattie) means, friend,
In Caribian Dutch language... ;)


I don't know what it is.... but you have
swooned me away again :)
You're special buddy! xx

[Matt Sayer]

Your poetry moves me too, Elisa! You have something special inside, that much is clear :)

read moreYour poetry moves me too, Elisa! You have something special inside, that much is clear :)

Midwinters melt when the Sun shines so bright,
Cold hands are banished to the depths of the night,
The fog burned to cinders, the air filled with light,
The heavens descend, a love of pure white.

:)

[Matt Sayer]

Midwinters melt when the Sun shines so bright,
Cold hands are banished to the depths of the night,
The fog burned to cinders, the air filled with light,
The heavens descend, a love of pure white.

[Matt Sayer]

Posted in parts, because WC is glitching :P

Oh that's so beautifil

I wait... patiently, to post it again.... cause it got cut off...

Oh that's so beautiful

It's not you it's this site.... full of glitches, in our light....

Oh that's so beautiful

LOL, I must laugh so hard now Matt.... :D I wait again to post.....

Oh that's so beautiful

LOL, I give up darling friend..... I'll post you tomorrow... we are too magnetic ;)

[Matt Sayer]

Magnetic magic destroying the web! :P

Yep, yep and yep!!! like those 3 hexa's..... grrr....

See my horns? ;) they are growing... ha!

Another try:

Oh that's so beautiful

Everyone now knows how beautiful it is... ;) ha! I come back :D

[Matt Sayer]

lol :P So beautiful :)

[TL Boehm]

beautiful lark of a poem. It sings.

[Bob Sherunkle]

That was beautiful Matt. Great imagery and flowed so effortlessly.

[Matt Sayer]

Thank you Bob! Hope you're having a wonderful Christmas:)

[Bob Sherunkle]

So far far so quiet...that will all change in a couple of hours.You have a great day Matt.

[Traci]

Beautiful imagery, and words that paint a lovely picture. Again well done Matt.

[Matt Sayer]

Thank you Traci :)

[Rogie-Dodge]

It paints a beautiful picture in my soul.

[Matt Sayer]

Thanks Rogie! :)

[Susannah Rae]

love the natural flow throughout, your words definitely have a life all their own!

[Matt Sayer]

Thank you so much Susannah! :)

[Daniel Sala]

What a lovely love poem, well-thought out and carefully composed.

[Matt Sayer]

Thank you so much Daniel! :)

[Anna Blackburn]

Love this one. The metaphors, imagery, and mood. It's just so wonderful. I can see so much of the picture you have created, which really emphasizes the poem.

[Matt Sayer]

Thanks Anna! Love to share the tumultuous world that lives in my head :)

[Rachelle]

now when will I ever write like that? I am so immersed in science I am drowning in it and can't cross over. Congratulations for being able to traverse both worlds with ease...

[Matt Sayer]

Thanks sweetbind! Science and love are not so far apart; your love for science is just as powerful as love for anything else :)

[Lyn Anderson]

A lovely, flowing, captivating verse. If I were so inclined I would feel warm and fuzzy all over:)

[Matt Sayer]

Thanks KL! :)