Jule & Peke (sneek peek)

From? - "Jule & Peke" episode 1 Character: Jule Age: 10 Gender: F

Jule- "That makes no sense! You haven't even met me, so you can't judge me! Right? Of course I'm right! Even if I wasn't I shouldn't be asking you!...(pauses) What's that, on your face? Is that a... that's gross, wait. Never mind. Anywho, what was I saying? Oh, yes. You cannot judge a book by their cover! Ok, so just don't be materialistic! You should be more like me! I always see the positive side! (looks to the side) Oh my word. I can't believe Geniveve is wearing that! (looks back at Peke)Now, I will be expecting an apology before lunch tomorrow. Any questions?"

Author's Note

This is a monologue from a series of short "plays" I wrote called "Jule & Peke. Before I post them, I wanted to see if it was good enough. Thanks :)

Reviews

[Stammers]

It's got a lot of personality, it either needs more to be posted to make sense of it, or it needs a layout change or some clarification. Bold, charismatic voice though :)

[Jasmine A. Mack]

the voice?

[nostal]

Is the voice your own?