Not So Perfect

Not So Perfect

A Poem by Jasmine A. Mack

If you look at the world straight on you see,
exactly what they want you to.
People know what's going on,
and nothing at all is ever wrong.
But let us all look from an angle.
What do you see now?
People crying? People killing?
Less money, more chaos. 
A world is falling apart.
Maybe it's not so perfect after all.


© 2011 Jasmine A. Mack


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thank you for this,i dont even have to look..i dont have the heart
i just look at the lady in the picture,such burden and worries i see
those children on her shoulders,she must think of them a lot
the world is really shameless..could it ever be this bad..and for what
money,stupid money and stupid glory,ohh look what man has become
lovely write..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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An interesting point of view. Well written and valuable.

Posted 13 Years Ago


thank you for this,i dont even have to look..i dont have the heart
i just look at the lady in the picture,such burden and worries i see
those children on her shoulders,she must think of them a lot
the world is really shameless..could it ever be this bad..and for what
money,stupid money and stupid glory,ohh look what man has become
lovely write..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jasmine A. Mack
Jasmine A. Mack

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I write about anything, everything, nothing.... As long as I've got a pencil and paper, I'm fine. I also, -Act -Sing -Dance -Play guitar My Favorite Quote/ Dialouge! "Get that out of my f.. more..

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