Just Another Love Story

The cold, ruthless wind of jealousy nipped at my newly broken heart.

I cried a thousand tears today and I didn't need them to start again.

It's not like I had never expected for me and him to fall apart.

But now it was like reality kicked in,

as I saw her twiggy, clingy arm wrapped around him. 

She didn't deserve him, and I thought he would know better.

Obviously, I was wrong about more than just that. 

I wished I could push her away and claim him mine again,

But sadly I knew if I even tried, I probably wouldn't win.

Hatred, sorrow, and envy gnawed at my soul.

I just couldn't take it anymore.

I ran out of the school at sat on the front steps,

and I didn't take kindly to the sound of foot steps.

I just hid my face and hoped they would leave before anyone else noticed me.

I felt a sudden warmth on my freezing hand,

I looked up and looked into eyes I couldn't withstand.

A familiar face in a new light.

My best friend looked at me with a concerned face and I smiled.

I had a new joy no one could efface.

A lucid love that was covert until this day. 

Just another love story..

Reviews

[The Cute 1]

this is nice

[Chris]

Ends and beginnings... dreams and wish-they-weres. You touched loss and anger, hurt, and defeat- a touch of despair... renewal and hope... light...
You proved humans are fractals all over again...

No words were killed, stomped, or abused in the production of this review/comment.

Chris

[Shadow in the Dark]

Don't we wish that would happen to us all? *sigh* Oh well i guess we'll just have to keep hoping. I really loiked your poem it made me feel jelous too so congratulations on making the reader feel something which is a great accomplisement.