Intro-

Intro-

A Chapter by Jasmine A. Mack

"Hey man," Charles said as he plopped down in the seat next to Draco and immediately flipping his blonde dreadlocks out of his face.
"Hey," Draco said back while adjusting his sunglasses so no one could see the dark circles around his eyes. 
Charles noticed quickly that something was wrong. "You ok dude?" 
"I'm fine!" Draco growled, bearing his pearly white fangs at Charles.
Charles sighed. He was used to this. "Yo, Draco. You totally need to like stop skipping breakfast! Your a vampire, you can't lose weight or gain any!" 
Charles laughed at his own joke.
Draco repressed a smile as he retracted his fangs. "Sorry. Just, there was slim pickings today in the woods and theres no humans around for miles," Draco sighed into his words. 
"Dude, that sucks. Well, not literally cuz you can't suck blood cuz the problem is that you like have no blood to suck. So that doesn't suck."
Draco nodded, pretending to understand his best friends strange dialogue. What did he expect? A mermaid to make sense? He doubted that would ever happen. They all talk like surfers.
The bell rang and Mr. Clementyne walked into the classroom. Well, technically he flew. He's a fairy. 
"Take your seats!" 
The rest of the class sat down immediately. He may have been a fairy, but he was terrifying with his cold blue eyes and scornful face. He probably could make a ghost fear for their life.
Class was a bore. They just had an hour and a half lecture about how what would happen if "meddies" or humans should ever fall in love with a creature. Basically, they die. Why it took longer than an hour to establish that? No one had a clue.
After all their classes were over, Draco and Charles went back to their room. One of the best parts about going to a boarding school was that you could walk to your room from school. 
Draco got back to his and Charle's dorm and smirked as a picked up a note that had been slipped under their door. They were going to a party tonight.


© 2011 Jasmine A. Mack


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Draco got back to his and Charle's dorm and smirked as a picked up a note that had been slipped under their door. They were going to a party tonight.
- This is the only thing you added to the entire Intro, you don't need a whole new chapter. Same errors too.

Charle's
- Charles' or you could say 'their dorm'

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