Andromeda

Written 10/3/15

She’s a galaxy

A garden of stars and I want to hold each one

She can shine so bright, but she burns out more often than not

She seems unattainable; she is always out of my reach

I can only point my telescope to the sky and wait for night

Reviews

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All right this one is perfect. Beautiful poetic end , reader can wonder through your words . There is nice meaningful love desire. Poem have sad tone , but most of my writing too. Allegory of stars and humans always work great.