An Insomniacs Dreamland

for when I can't get to sleep at night.

Insomnia, it smothers you like a plague,

Keeping you awake and then asking, 

When can I escape?

Escape to that wonderful place called dreamland,

Where the fearies and sprites dance all day,

And dance all night.

Insomnia makes you want to dance,

If not just to fall asleep.

Asleep so you can visit that place called dreamland,

where the fearies and sprites dance all day,

And dance all night.

Reviews

[Emily Feret]

Insomnia makes you want to dance,
If not just to fall asleep.

I adore this line.

I think the ends where you repeat yourself about the fairies seems a bit redundant. Maybe add one more verse in between or something.

But a sufferer of insomnia at times myself, I really enjoyed this poem

[Chloe Yeoman]

Thanks! I'll see if I can come up wit ha verse and edit it it.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I suffer from Insomnia.I understand this well ,nice poetry Chloe :)

[Chloe Yeoman]

Thank you!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Dream°]

I love it. Thanks for the entry in my Dream Journal° Contest.