The Nothing

Nothing is the oblivion,

But again and again I am oblivious,

To the the pain and hurt of everyone,

I am feeling nothing to everyone's everything.

For one who laughs and plays,

There's one who weeps and cries,

For one who feels everything,

There's one who feels nothing.

Some would have you believe that the nothing captures you,

Some would have you believe that the nothing saves you.

But alas the nothing is the oblivion,

and again and again I am oblivious,

To the pain and hurt of everyone,

I am feeling nothing to everyone's everything. 

Reviews

[SonOfPlunder]

Nothing is the oblivion,
But again and again I am oblivious,
To the the pain and hurt of everyone,
I am feeling nothing to everyone's everything

Absolutely brilliant verse, and very cleverly constructed. This grabbed me instantly, very good work

[Chloe Yeoman]

Thank you! Thanks for taking the time to review and read my work!

[SonOfPlunder]

You are very welcome. Keep at it!