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A Poem by mabel mae
© 2024 mabel mae
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it is what it is...succinctly stated...
each word dropped a line...the speaker is actually falling toward her attended or away from.
That is for us as readers to decide.
I like the lower case "i"....
the speaker puts more importance on her words than on herself.
j.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Month Ago
i can't help but smile at this review. thank you Jacob. -mabel
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it is what it is...succinctly stated...
each word dropped a line...the speaker is actually falling toward her attended or away from.
That is for us as readers to decide.
I like the lower case "i"....
the speaker puts more importance on her words than on herself.
j.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Month Ago
i can't help but smile at this review. thank you Jacob. -mabel
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Added on October 15, 2024
Last Updated on October 15, 2024
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mabel maenowhere, shh
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hello, my name is mabel. I have been writing poetry for about 2 years now and am constantly looking for new ways to improve.
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