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A Poem by mae

i
ache
for
your
touch.

© 2024 mae


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it is what it is...succinctly stated...
each word dropped a line...the speaker is actually falling toward her attended or away from.
That is for us as readers to decide.
I like the lower case "i"....
the speaker puts more importance on her words than on herself.
j.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mae

5 Months Ago

i can't help but smile at this review. thank you Jacob. -mabel



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it is what it is...succinctly stated...
each word dropped a line...the speaker is actually falling toward her attended or away from.
That is for us as readers to decide.
I like the lower case "i"....
the speaker puts more importance on her words than on herself.
j.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mae

5 Months Ago

i can't help but smile at this review. thank you Jacob. -mabel

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