visiting hours

visiting hours

A Poem by mabel mae

the ground shakes,
a chill runs through the air.
it looks so empty from the road
so no one stops to stare.

you lay on your bed of daisies,
your eyes forever shut,
the flowers that will soon consume you
and all that's left of us.

initials etched into the snow,
were bound to melt away,
but you promised we would live forever.
so why couldn't you stay?

© 2024 mabel mae


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Added on August 28, 2024
Last Updated on November 8, 2024

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mabel mae
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