8:34 am

8:34 am

A Poem by mabel mae

the stars were screaming last night
and I think that in the midst of it
your voice was the loudest

© 2024 mabel mae


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Maybe it’s just my interpretation, but I get the impression there wasn’t any actual noise which makes this extra intriguing to me. The mixing of sounds and visuals creates a whole scene even though it was only described in 3 lines. I enjoyed this.

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Maybe it’s just my interpretation, but I get the impression there wasn’t any actual noise which makes this extra intriguing to me. The mixing of sounds and visuals creates a whole scene even though it was only described in 3 lines. I enjoyed this.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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mabel mae
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