5:57 pm

5:57 pm

A Poem by mabel mae

it really hit me
just how much I missed you
when I heard your voice again
after all those months.

© 2024 mabel mae


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Mabel,
I used to have my students write down a small event, or thing that no one else noticed or knew about, something of no importance that somehow haunts their thoughts beyond its seeming value. 5:57 pm is exactly what I was going for. Tiny things of great consequence are delightful mind toys.
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Posted 3 Months Ago


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Mabel,
I used to have my students write down a small event, or thing that no one else noticed or knew about, something of no importance that somehow haunts their thoughts beyond its seeming value. 5:57 pm is exactly what I was going for. Tiny things of great consequence are delightful mind toys.
Vol

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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