11:30 pm

s**t happened. might post, might not.

i have found

my moon, 

sun, 

stars, 

and cosmos;

forever intertwined 

in this spinning web of

broken galaxies.

Reviews

[Amy R]

Powerful little write,
liking the focus on celestial imagery. Nice and straightforward poem.

The use of words like "moon," "sun," "stars," and "cosmos" creates a sense of wonder and awe. The word "web" creates a sense of interconnectedness and unity.
NIce
-Amy