2:07 pm

back - feelin motivational :p

completely unfettered.

panting and screeching,

bloodied kneecaps and blistered hands.

take another step,

make another wish,

because this is your life

burning.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what an intetesting allegory presented here.

a literal burning and a figurative burning....

but going for it!

[Chris Shaw]

Escape, you paint a picture here of a bloodied escape. My mind is in overdrive wondering about who she is running from. Nice brevity Mabel.

Chris

[Ballpark Frank]

Is this after someone has been attacked? My guess

[mae]

yes, so, this is actually a motivational poem about something of the sort. i was trying to paint a picture of someone staying alive despite going through battle. glad you could pick up on my not-so-subtle hint at the story here. -mabel