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A Poem by mabel mae

i love you 
but i cannot survive you.

© 2024 mabel mae


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Hi ,

The two lines much contradict. It shows missunderstandings that you can write fate of others but you are not the one to decide someones fate. Mabel, shani dev also hurts on the commad of God not by his self order.


Amen to my love to live longer and safer with much adoration.



Posted 6 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen to this.........

I have felt this, and had to leave this in the past.

j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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