10:28 am

10:28 am

A Poem by mabel mae
"

i’m so productive today

"
it’s hard to think
but at the end of the day
i am my mother’s child.
and she knows where i stand.

© 2024 mabel mae


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Hi,
You have been with him since 18 yrs. Dont say that you never had. Still he allowed you to touch him physically. You have enjoyed his personal space very much within your boundary space and space limitters. Everyone knows how much you forced him to be with you in 2013, now you are repiting the same,

Now let live others. If you havent stopped at that time we could have two kids by now happy with our family and biz. My father in law would have seen his grand kids and ever happily he would have been with his success. You made lose two people your father and his father without ever making happy but with torturesome pain you made them leave this world for your desires Nd dreams.
You spoiled our life at the cost of our 3 lives me my son and him. Still god did allow only to see how far your righteous and your path for him follows which path.
Now everyone seen your ways. Though still god allowed you to touch him. Why he says hi how are you take care, becsuse that is his kindness even to his enemies, he is none other than bhola. Just to make the enemies even nicer and be happy.
Now you are cutting our lives, where we cant stay without each other at this mid life kindly let us live and we never ever get into where we could trouble your life to get disturbed this much where you are self deceiving by hurting yourself. Sorty if it is his mistake to make or be with you. He will never repeat this again as you are suffering so much with his innocent care for you.

Stop this very politely i would say this to you. By face to face this weekend. Like how a wife begs for her husband safety from a woman.

Jessy jacob.
With love to enemies
The utmost sutra of buddhism meditation.

Posted 6 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mabel mae

6 Months Ago

i’m sorry but how exactly does this relate to what i wrote? i was trying to convey where me and my.. read more
my mom finally knew where I stood.....but it took until her later years...

we came to an understanding before her end.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

161 Views
2 Reviews
Added on May 8, 2024
Last Updated on August 25, 2024

Author

mabel mae
mabel mae

nowhere, shh



About
hello, my name is mabel. I have been writing poetry for about 2 years now and am constantly looking for new ways to improve. friending works two ways. if I review your poems, I expect you to do the.. more..

Writing
melomaniac melomaniac

A Poem by mabel mae


1:07 pm 1:07 pm

A Poem by mabel mae