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A Poem by mabel mae

“you could stay, you know.”
a thought.
a whisper.

“but if i stay,
then where would i go?”
an echo.
a smirk.


© 2024 mabel mae


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mou
'Where would I go?'
Perhaps we all want to be in a place where we are expected, welcomed, and valued. It shows the power of brevity. Beautiful write.
- mou


Posted 6 Months Ago


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mabel mae
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hello, my name is mabel. I have been writing poetry for about 2 years now and am constantly looking for new ways to improve. friending works two ways. if I review your poems, I expect you to do the.. more..

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