she.

She wasn’t conventionally pretty.

She was messy, naturally variegated hair.

She was systematically arbitrary makeup.

She was lackadaisical outfits.

She was off-white teeth.

She was overall beguiling.

She was emotions personified.

She wasn’t conventionally pretty.

But maybe someone could think that she’s beautiful.

Reviews

[doooh]

I like the focus on outward appearance until the 2nd to last stanza before the first line repeats

[Thomas]

I like this creative take on the "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" idea. But it would sound more natural to me with the title "She."

[mabel mae]

right of course! though i did try to give it more, “look at her,” vibes because these words were spoken to me by my beautiful boyfriend. i see how it makes more sense, i will fix it soon. -mabel

[Chris Shaw]

She is unique and beauty on the outside doesn’t last. Inner beauty does and when you meet inner beauty you remember it.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

unconventional, uncommon, unnoticed...
some may put beauty in a corner...and outwit themselves by doing so.
j.

[Papaya]

It's our imperfections that make us unique and stand out.
Perfection is over rated. There's no room for growth. That would be boring. 💛🙂