Pain. a Senryu

Pain. a Senryu

A Chapter by M Garcia

She is terrified

Always afraid of herself

Hurting, scared, pain, help



© 2011 M Garcia


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Anxiety is unbearable

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so strong and it holds so much in so very little this is a wonderful write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm surprised this hasn't received more comments even though it's short. This really flows very well and the description is enough to cause a good tension in the reader. It's as though your describing someone I know. Like this one a lot. 100

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 20, 2011
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