Voices

A little diddy I call Voices. Something different.

The voices tell me

     To cripple the competition

          The voices tell me

               To heal friends

                    The voices tell me

               To let it all go

          The voices tell me

     To leave it all alone

The voices tell me

     It will all be all right

          The voices tell me

               To relax

                    The voices

               They're all around

          The voices

     The

The

     Voicaes

          Voices

               Th

                    E

               Voi

          Ces

Author's Note

Another brought over from my old profile.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was an interesting poem. Voices in your head can tell you to do all kinds of things wrong or right, but you should only focus on the positive things not the negative ones. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Another Relic]

It looks like something someone would say as their falling asleep. An introspection on thier life. Nice.

[Art Sun]

Nice work...the format goes well with your thoughts, words,,,and makes for an interestingly written poem...

[JanieB]

I really like this. you can hear the echoing of the voices..well done.

[Marie Harrison]

Oh, I love this one. I hear these voices all of the time. The other day I paid for my gas and drove off accidently, this little voice told me that I needed to go back that I forgot to pump my gas. I hear the voice all of the time. Brilliant. I love the creative structure of the poem too. Cool poem.