Sierra Mist

Just something I came up with while sitting here sipping a Mist and listening to Jay-Z and Alicia Keys "Empire State of Mind" (version on his album Blueprint 3).

Sitting here
Sipping the Mist
Listening to
Empire State of Mind
Waiting to make a phone call
No one is around
Wanting to get up
Sing and dance
At the top of my lungs
Shouldn't be writing
Should be sleeping
But just can't
Shake that call
Too tired to
Do much
Can't do the Dew
Too tired
Maybe
I
Should
Sleep
Zzzzzzz

Reviews

[Muse]

I know the feeling! Tired....but your mind is running! It's a frenzied state of mind that needs to write. It needs to be exercised or you cannot sleep!

[sarah]

This is a really interesting write! I love it!

[Short.Nerd]

I love Sierra Mist :) Great poem!

[Dark Empress]

cute

[Marie]

fun little diddy.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

playful delight of a poem~ a simple moment spun through an enjoyable poetic!~

Sierra Mist is a good replacement for Sprite in a Shirley Temple.

[Ni1408]

Never had Sierra Mist but I think I should try it!